Having Difficulty Writing A Compelling Offer' Click On A TV
Yes it's true. Everything I ever needed to learn about assembling a compelling offer, especially telling the difference between features and benefits, I learned from TV
infomercials!
Now, just give me a second here.
Remember when you first started learning how to write copy' Whether for a classified ad or a sales letter, it was drummed in that it had to be a 'compelling offer,' heavy on
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benefits, not features.
But, telling the difference between benefits and features, plus putting together the offer in a convincing way, was a bit tough.
Then, late one night, I stumbled (clicked') onto a secret treasure trove of ideas, that I've continued to use to this day.
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If you want to hear benefit-laden offers presented in a emotional and compelling manner, just watch the infomercials!
Note how they effectively use the following (think you could incorporate any of these in your offers'):
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*Testimonials. The participants describe the products used on a very emotional level. Because they took a chance and ordered, their complexions are now clearer, waistbands looser, their meat grills easier (and with less fat)...
By positioning the testimonials in such a way that the audience identifies with them makes the 'what's in it for me' come across in a very clear and compelling way.
The Write FormulaWhat's the difference between effective sales copy and copy
that will fall flat on its face' There are a lot of
ingredients that go into good sales copy. Here are just a
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*The Concept of Value. A full-size product comes with a free 'travel size.' The order comes complete with bonus audio tapes and 'quick start' videos. Or you get a lovely bathrobe along with the leg waxing kit.
*Proof. An extension of the testimonial, benefits are often presented visually. Before/after pictures are shown for a weightloss product or acne treatment. Live makeup demonstrations show how beauty can be yours, instantly. Copies of cancelled checks are displayed for houses
purchased using a real estate system.
*Urgency. The products can only be
ordered by 800 number, available only
during the show. ......
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